The outcomes of my feedback

First of all, I would like to say thank you to Sara for spending time checking my work. I can’t even tell you how happy I am that I’ve passed this assessment.

To be honest, the second term was not easy for me but I tried my best. This term we did lots of engrossing and productive work. I explored a big amount of new things for me such as fashion journalism, piar strategies, etc. I did my second design collection and was experimenting a lot with procreate and Adobe photoshop.

I am really thankful for giving me feedback on the specific things I need to improve. According to the feedback on fashion design I need to develop my sketching skills and engage more with the tasks at hand. Also, give more attention on the details. I will practice more to improve it.

Having analysed my media feedback I need to develop more in-depth analysis of the PR work and attract more connection between my original research into the artist. And finally moving to my favorite part – business I need to improve the development of the concepts, critique about the SWOT model and explain more detailed about written work that outlines my research, investigation, analysis and final outcomes.

To conclude, analysing the whole feedback I understood my strength and weaknesses and I am already working. I am very excited for the term 3 and ready to work really hard.

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